czwartek, 21 września 2017

flash fiction again

  .There is this girl that is always smiling.
She will never tell you what's bothering her for she cares too much about not hurting anyone.
  There is this girl that is always dancing on her own. She seems happy yet the ground is constantly shaking under her tiny feet.
  This girl seems tough. And she will be, one day. But for now - she's had enough.

2 komentarze:

  1. A very interesting idea - a little like a poem with the repeated motive. I'd think again about the last sentence though - it doesn't sound quite right.

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  2. I originally wrote it as a poem so that's why it might sound like one-I wasn't sure if that's okay

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